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Dear Hannah, Wow you have really thought carefully about adjectives and verbs that would make your writing more interesting. Thank you for adding your own extra SC as well. You have shown really good paragraphing. The one SC that you could extend further would be adverbs. Sometimes it is really good to start your sentences with adverbs such as - Quietly I awoke and got out of my bed. Next time can you please make sure that you save your copy of your writing into your writing folder and I will be able to write your feedback and feed forward into your document. Mā te wā Mrs Aperahama
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Dear Hannah,
ReplyDeleteWow you have really thought carefully about adjectives and verbs that would make your writing more interesting. Thank you for adding your own extra SC as well. You have shown really good paragraphing. The one SC that you could extend further would be adverbs. Sometimes it is really good to start your sentences with adverbs such as - Quietly I awoke and got out of my bed.
Next time can you please make sure that you save your copy of your writing into your writing folder and I will be able to write your feedback and feed forward into your document.
Mā te wā
Mrs Aperahama